Wednesday, April 15, 2009

Kush toh bahut hoge tum?

aaj khush toh bahut hoge tum?
dekho!
joh aaj tak tumhari mandir ka raasta naahi dekha!
jissne aaj tak tumhare aage sir naahi jhukaya!
jissne aaj tak kabhi tumhare samne haath naahi joode
woh aaj tumhare samne haath fhalaye khada hae!
bahut kush hoge tum!
bahut kush hoge tum ki aaj main aa gaya..!!

lekin tum jante ho ki jis waqt main yahan khadha hun
woh ladki jiski chappal se madras university ki chokhat ki pathar giss gaya
woh ladki jispe lecture badhe toh tumhari pooja badhi
woh ladki jo zindagi baar padhai karte rahi,magar tumhare mandir me deep jalati raahi..
woh ladki ka aaj industrial economics ka paper hae..
aur yeh tumhari haar hae..haan yeh tumhari haar hae..

kya kasur hae uska?
kaunsa paap ??kaunsa jurm kiya hae usne...??
kya uska jurm yeh hae ki woh ek student hae?
kya uska jurm yeh hae ki usne mera orkut friend request accept kiya hae?
kya uska jurm yeh hae ki main uska dost hun?
yeh kis jurm ki saaza de ja rahi hae usse?
main college se nikal gaya...
mere dost jeeteji fail gaya...
mera ek dost graduate hote hue bhi beroozgar ho gaya.
maine tumse kabhi kuch naahi manga.
lekin aaj aaj mangta hun...

mere cheating karke pass hone ki saaza meri dost ko maat do..
main apne aapko tumhare hawale karta hun...jo chahe kar lo
lekin meri dostka xm badiya jaana chahiye!
meri dostka xm badiya jaana chahiye!
meri dostka xm badiya jaana chahiye!

14 comments:

the pink orchid said...

OH MY GOD!!!

Vitruvian ... you are so damn sweet.. sweeter than the sweetest.. what have I done to deserve so much of care?!

a big hug to you!!

thank you sooooooo much.. ab to mera exam achha jaane se koi bhi nahi rok sakta.. i am prepared and your wishes.. deadly combination..watch out my teachers and my fellow scholars.. ;)

raj87 said...

Greatly written man appreciable...

cutestangel said...

good words sounds like scene with amitabh in a bollywood movie in a temple!!!lolz

Where thoughts are Word$ said...

Loved it...
:)

Hope her exam is good!

Now I'm sure she'll do well!! :)

Rusty said...

dont worry dude...
your prayers wont go unnoticed
she'll do well

dora said...

:)

The Vitruvian Boy said...

@ Nayna ji

yup u got it right.....
Movie's name is Deewar.... :D

The Vitruvian Boy said...

@ kajal

Yup thats the spirit i wanted to build up....
U see more than prayers its human spirit that makes things happen...

Go on sab xms me phod ke aana... :)

the pink orchid said...

@all: thank you so much for the wishes..:)

Adisha said...

LOL !! Very well written :) What a touching tale praying for another .. :)

Best wishes to you and her , for exams and otherwise :D

Cheers,
adisha

cutestangel said...

I hope you get the fruits of your prayers if not for you at least for her!!!But I ma sure you will both succeed.

Mads said...

too good and too sweet \:D/ loved the thought behind it and well executed re....
hope she did awesomely well in her exam :D

THE FUNKY ZONE said...

hey dude nice wrk...
its vry intresting...
1ce u read u feel lke reading again man...
nd its total filmy types...

angel from heaven said...

lovely poem!!

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